My love endures, absolving her callous passion.
Meandering through myriad array of sentiments and folly
It arrives at an island of obsolete intellections and fashion.
Life goes on, plunging my follies, in a galley.
Lurking in a distant scene is my future like a dream.
Suddenly, from the fathomless sea, rises a tide
Along came an albatross to annihilate my dream.
Steering through the mist I guide
my destiny to the shore, in a galley called hope.
Far away I see a green mat of coconut leaves.
Like the beach I fantasize, where I elope
with my beloved and her love I receives.
Wading through the shallows I reach
the shore, will I find my beloved on the beach?
PS: The above poem is the result of my failed attempt to create a sonnet.

5 comments:
~Steering through the mist I guide
my destiny to the shore, in a galley called hope.~
Awesome! Now if thats a failed attempt of urs, I wudnt mind going thru a few successful ones..
:)
I enjoy reading your poems here :) They are quite touching...
Interesting imagery about hope; lovely poem.
doc!
new post..urgently wanted!
;)
Hiren,
Welcome to my blog
Velu,
New poem is comming soon. I consider your interst as true appreciation . Thanks
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